《关于Myfamily的作文》【第一篇】
My family
i'm a student.my name is chenyalin.i'm a happy girl.i like eat cake.i am 12 year old.i have a brother.he is happy.he is 9 year old .his name is chenyawen.i have a nice mother and tall father too.my mother is 35 year old.my father is 37 year old.i am writing to my friend.chenyawen is playing soccer.mother is cooking dinner.father is watching tv.my family is happy! 《关于MyFavoriteFood的作文》【第二篇】
My Favorite Food
food is necessary in our life . i like many different kinds of food.let metell you a littleabout my favorites.my favorite vegetable is potato .i don'tlike carrots.apples are my favorite fruit. they are sweet ,juicy and delicious .and my favorite meat is beef . i always have beef for dinner. 《关于Myfriend的作文》【第三篇】
Xiao Ming and I are good friend.We ofen read books and play games together.Xiao Ming is 12 years old,and I am 12 years old.But she heavier than me.She's 35 kilograms.I'am 32 kilograms.Xiao Ming is 1.41 meters.I'm 3 cm taller than Xiao Ming.I'm1.44 meters.We are classmates.We all like drawing.
We aregood friends!
修改后：
Xiao Ming and I are good friends. We ofen read books and play games together. Xiao Ming is 12 years old, and I am 12 years old, too. She is heavier than me. She's 35 kilograms, and I'm 32 kilograms. Xiao Ming is 1.41 meters. I'm 3 cm taller than Xiao Ming. We are classmates.We all like drawing.
修改教师：Andy老师
六年级:罗晶莹
